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Call it love
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Call it love |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I respond to your touch still even eagerly a thirst yet to be satisfied angry then with myself for weakness even submission how is it I should live with myself while needing you so let’s agree to see it our own way but together call it love |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
oh this hits home... love, need, it all does make us weak, doesnt it, but thats not always a bad thing... felt the longing and ache in this Duncan. well done poet sir. jm |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"angry then with myself for weakness even submission" yes.  this is perfect. (library) "I know you, I walked with you once upon a dream" |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
"but together, call it love. . . " what else would you call it? well done my friend. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
this one... speaks to me. Very well done Duncan!!! I enjoyed the style and the delivery... good stuff!!! |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Duncan- This speaks of me so, you know I love it! Thanks. |
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poetsguild Member
since 2001-08-12
Posts 85Florida |
As much as we want to be needed we hate being needy. But in tandem it can work out well. May the fire burn all the brighter. |
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