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Open Poetry #15

Beclouded

poetsguild
Member

since 2001-08-12

Posts 85
Florida

0 posted 2001-08-22 07:50 PM

Clouds rove in hordes
as if there was
a reason for their motion;
insensible to the limits
of human territory,
unattached to
their vaporous existence.
Conglomerated ions bound
like a flock of birds -
amorphous and vague,
instinctually moving
after the weather turns and
the sun sends its illusions
out over the ocean;
the tumbled feathers
lavishing the rippled curls.

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

1 posted 2001-08-22 08:05 PM

Enjoyed this very much!

Deb

poetsguild
Member

since 2001-08-12

Posts 85
Florida

2 posted 2001-08-22 08:42 PM

Thanks, BloomingRose.

RSWells
Member Elite

since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

3 posted 2001-08-23 09:22 AM

Good imagery in this flight of fancy free.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2001-08-23 09:34 AM

Poetsguild,
Good write, pleasant read.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

5 posted 2001-08-23 06:10 PM

indeed good imagery... enjoyed this for the language, images and thoughts...

Nicely written!!!!

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