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Rubber Band
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Rubber Band |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Rewrite: Rubber Band Some times I feel a rubber band Stretched taught to the point where I stand. Just picked upon by circumstance And launched into each happenstance. Each day is like a bungee jump Or slap upon a horses rump Most are gray and of plain dreary That vent the day like pot puree. But now I’ve made seven league boots From out those very rubber shoots I wear them on my trips of wile That never fails to bring a smile. Leap o’er the present circumstance And o’er the coming happenstance In other words I wile reshape To a much more pleasant escape Where I become a butterfly Sipping nectar of pacify. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Just picked upon by circumstance And launched into each happenstance. Each day is like a bungee jump Or slap upon a horses rump ========================= I wear them on my trips of wile That never fails to bring a smile. Leap o’er the present circumstance And o’er the coming happenstance In other words I wile reshape To a much more pleasant escape Where I become a butterfly Sipping nectar of pacify. ============================== Oh my wile and wise butterfly gift of vision thru thy poetic eyes wont you come fly free with me tea for two ... nectar of sweet coveted raspberry  *winkiewinkie*  meFeels like Im dancin with truth and wisdom Precious rhythm you are my guide These days are sacred, my heart is humble Oh warrior show me thy light [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 08-23-2001).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, My dearest Tinkerbell, there would be nothing better. We'll double up on Randy and go for a joy ride. Winkiewinkie. Stinky |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well, even if I had the blues, this would've bounced me right out of them... so enjoyed, Sy! Thanks! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, I think Randy can carry three why don't you join us. *L* |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Like a rubber band I'll come sproinging back to you... Uh.. That was a rubber ball, huh? I like this, Sy - You can write about just anything and make it work..  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Caught up in your rubber-bandy I think I'd like a ride with Randy ! Stretching the envelope to the sky Oh ...... to ride upon *Sy-sigh* Ya' just come bouncing back~ I luv it~ *Hugs* n' *smoochies* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan, It's not hard when I know you are going to read it. *L* and hugs and kisses. Marge, You are so charming and cute For you I'll make a pait of seven league boots |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You are one of my favorite poets. I just wanted you to know that.  You take everyday thoughts and make a journey of them.I do SO much enjoy! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
ditto ditto ditto... *smiling* ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Serenity, And you are one of my favorite readers, thank you. Wynter, Ditto to the above, thank you. |
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