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Burning Read |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Wrap me softly in your words letting me slide in the spaces between letters feeling them aloe burning memories wet syllables spreading oily fire as unchecked thoughts are fueled I Roll in the vowels covering me in sweet sounds that gently ever so softly undress the meanings then prop me against the Consonants As I wait for The healing Warmth of Your world [This message has been edited by Cpat Hair (edited 08-22-2001).] |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
If there were ever a poem that I would want to read between the lines....it would be this one....it's just begging for that type of read.... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
 well ...somebody is awfully sweet this morning...and you are SO making me want to go back to bed...(I'll behave if you will  ) |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Lady: It is in the spaces between the lines we often find the truths... feel free to read between the lines, or the syllables...and take from it, that which suits you today... Thank you for the nice words.... as always they are appreciated. Serinity: I didn't know you knew how to behave!!! ( laughing) and as far as me behaving... all I have done is write a poem or two...what in the world is misbehaving in that?? ( innocent look) As for going back to bed..hey if there is someone there waiting...get you hiney in there.. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Putting words in a whole new light, you are...  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cpat Hair, Your just looking for a ship of verbs. Enjoyed |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
oh my this is incredible....this is one of my favorites...I wrote one on this line once, but it was sad, seems most of mine are, I like yours so much better  |
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Flutterwings Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 288Maine |
I love the way this poetic melody tumbles ever so gently in my ear. A great write.... It left me with the feeling of *more*...  Love and peace Maggie ((~.~)) |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Cpat, now this is quite a syllabus! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
speechless...I think you took all the vowels and consonants away in your burn and I've little left with which to respond, either that or last night's rain washed away my brain...you know "Rain Makes Applesauce." |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
and if by chance taken from the shelf take a look reading these lines make an open book then read me as I am from cover to cover letters in line words uncurl sounds of discover you inspire me...helen |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh how I love rolling in towels...er, um, I meant vowels!! You do sensual very well indeed! ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
I ~feel~ this poem. Well done. Deb |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
The beauty of words, what all poets live for, in a way. Special write. Sandra |
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