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When You Put It That Way
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When You Put It That Way |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida 
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When You Put It That Way ~~~~~~~ When you put it that way can’t stay deep inside myself give me wings from lonely nights I’ll fly When you put it that way I’ll do it for you no other search upon my wishing star I’m there When you put it that way I’m helpless at last especially when you put it that way in whispers of love BloomingRose |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BloomingRose~ You just breathe this delicate stuff sooooooo lovingly~ A pleasure to read you, sweet lady~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
When you put it that way one might well wish it were directed at oneself. Enjoyed this soft one. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
when you put it this way. . . we can't help but think that it's wonderful. . . great job. . .  --------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
well since yo put it that way.... I have to day this is a gentle soft romantic poem..and one I enjoyed a great deal |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I like those whispers of love...James |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
No matter how you put it ... it reads like a whisper of love on a song of forever. Beautiful write. |
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