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Decaflame
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0 posted 2001-08-22 03:48 PM


Forgotten Trips

you coursed
blueskied
watered ways
map-less,
no strain, but
following a northern
star, knew you
were following
a flow
that would lead
to de Leon's
treasures

you asked for
guidance, so,
your fingers taken
in weave of mine
I helped you
trace your
course

do you
remember all
of this, or
is that reverie but
a sound of
thunder in your
distance

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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2001-08-22 03:51 PM


Ah, eternal youth ... Wonderful!
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2 posted 2001-08-22 03:53 PM


yes nicely done... a pleasure to read...


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with you
3 posted 2001-08-22 08:47 PM


my soul remembers..... and will continue to remember  


oh, you know, this is wonderful!!  

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4 posted 2001-08-22 09:37 PM


Well you know I have to add this to my homepage don't you?  This is now an absolute favorite of mine - oh boy does this one like me in whispers I tell you!  Lovely.

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5 posted 2001-08-22 10:05 PM


DecaFlame~
You pulled me right along Ponce deLeon's path~
Wonderful !

*I have great familiarity with the
Ponce DeLeon Springs Park here in Florida.
Spent many a day enjoying the beauty of the place.

*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Janet Marie
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6 posted 2001-08-23 12:08 PM


you asked for
guidance, so,
your fingers taken
in weave of mine
I helped you
trace your
course

do you
remember all
of this, or
is that reverie but
a sound of
thunder in your
distance
=============================

this is outstanding Deca...
you already will KNOW how much I love this one and why.......
another keeper...TY
jm

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