Open Poetry #15 |
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Connecting the Dots |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace ![]() |
Connecting the Dots there is a dot inside my heart and there is one inside my head one is felt the other knows right with no compromise one always wins out instead I wish that I could find a way to connect these dots without this line pulled together it leaves me tied in knots "...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Tied in knots, how true it is. Cool poem. lady. Sandra |
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g-hm Member
since 2001-05-16
Posts 85 |
Why connect the dots, When you have to spend more time untying the knots? |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
1slick_lady- Very cool way of looking at this. Enjoyed. ![]() hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Sever the line, Let it flap in the breezes Disconnect and delight, In letting each have it’s own way, The strongest ruling out, That which most effects the heart will sweep you away, That which most effects the head will point the direction. Thus, you have two lines Heading out, Weaving the pathway of the tapestry of life. Gloom |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OneSlickLady~ Oh ... I like the premise of this~ Nice~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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