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Your serenade
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Your serenade |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
In the middle of the night I thought I heard you serenade my love I went to my balcony but only saw the stars with tears in my eyes I wished that my heart would remain true to itself [This message has been edited by walker (edited 08-22-2001).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Wonderful. That the serenade was heard is evidence of the presence of love  Homepage : http://members.home.net/excalibur2501/interloper.htm |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nice..and a haunting feel to this which is very compelling... one nit.. last line would remain true to itself |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I wished that my heart would remain true to itself It's hard to be true to yourself, when you truly just want to be loved. You'll find a balance...give it time. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Quite lovely...Hugs, Nancy. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
oh, if we could only stop aching for that which we may not have |
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