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Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

0 posted 2001-08-08 03:13 PM

In or Out

restricted access
keeping tight reins on feelings
right of entry refused

negativity
disinclined pessimism
not my style at all

approachable ways
keeping avenues open
welcoming the warm

outwardly I am
more inwardly inclined to
smile your fears away

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

1 posted 2001-08-08 03:43 PM

Lady--and you do so often

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

2 posted 2001-08-08 06:40 PM

And the most nurturing way to do so. Well written verse!
Sincerely,
Regina

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

3 posted 2001-08-09 12:35 PM

Ditto Martie, and that is your signature dear one!

~ To see real beauty you must look with your heart ~
~* Mysteria *~

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

4 posted 2001-08-09 09:45 AM

The sun and the moon
Each other's antithesis
Symbiotic light

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2001-08-09 10:04 AM

I think this is perfect....but then I do love the way you write

Constance
Member

since 2001-07-28

Posts 393
Ohio

6 posted 2001-08-09 10:44 AM

I'm impressed, as usual, by what you have so perfectly put. Your goodness shines in these lines!

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

7 posted 2001-08-22 11:53 PM

Lady In White-
   I love this!
   So wonderful, and so YOU!

   hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2001-08-23 11:32 AM

enjoy

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

9 posted 2001-08-23 11:38 AM

outwardly I am
more inwardly inclined to
smile your fears away
and inside? the world see the smile..and inside...well what is there that remains hidden?

Nicely done lady..and an enjoyable read

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

10 posted 2001-08-23 07:01 PM

Nicely flowing, with a message of love.
Sandra

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