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Cpat Hair
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0 posted 2001-08-22 10:10 AM


Passionate
words spoken in honesty
can warm or burn,
yet in either
one knows they are alive.

Love me softly
but with strength and heat
to make each day,
this day and the last,
the only.

Ignite in me
The passion,
For I am tender
in your hands


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SEA
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1 posted 2001-08-22 10:12 AM


wow......... melting me this morning  
I am SO keeping this one  

"I know you, I walked with you once upon a dream"

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2 posted 2001-08-22 10:37 AM



a riveting play on words, this one...well done, Sir!

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3 posted 2001-08-22 10:48 AM


mmm...hmmm...been that kind of morning for me too... had to go to the store for a SECOND pack of cigs...and I am NOT kidding...


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4 posted 2001-08-22 10:54 AM


Sea.. how does one melt that which is already fluid and flowing? ( smiling) I am glad you liked... and thank you for the very nice words.


Lady: Such play of word or rhyme
      pales it seems so may times
to that I see from your fine pen
still in all I will again

thank you!!


Serinity: Girl if you have had that kind of morning and were needing a second pack just for the afterwards... hell I am jealous... ( laughing)

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