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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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 Devil's Den Row after row, marblized in memory, ghostly chills walked over me as I stepped beyond today into a past rocked by helplessness, knowing death was around the corner. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Row after row, marblized in memory, ghostly chills walked over me as I stepped beyond today into a past rocked by helplessness, knowing death was around the corner. chilling revelation...and sobering to think of the lives lost and buried...in many cases prematurely due to no fault of their own other than being in the wrong place at the wrong time... I will speak of your still life...and say what other motivation do you need to embrace each day...knowing others may have not had the opportunity and we..you, me, all of us...have no guarranty we will have another... Nice poem....and as usual... I enjoyed a great deal reading and pondering your words... |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
your words really capture reality, a ghostly chill, wow, excellent write. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Very sad..nicely written Wynter..haunting.. ~Victoria~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
To all my friends above..and any others reading... visiting Gettysburg yesterday We took many pictures..but the two that stayed in my mind were of the cemetery... the above is of the over 900 unknown dead and this picture below is of the Devil's Den... huge boulders and me   thank you for reading... ~Wynter [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 08-22-2001).] |
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