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United as One |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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A young mother moved from her country and resided in a land far away her baby daughter cried, her mother did not understand she was abandoning her baby's chosen man The little boy she was destined to adore lived in a nearby village played in the sand along the seashore. Her future was denied, she could never be his bride destiny disappeared, like magic in the wind stripped of her roots, family and him Destined to meet beneath a mulberry tree walking in the park in the rain falling in love, like birds and the bees two hearts, to become a family Through a mysterious hand of fate they were brought together in an embrace two hearts united, how their hearts raced if only for a moment they shared destined love How could it be wrong? Each kiss a love note, a long awaited song. Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
This is a lovely story, Victoria! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
lovely story... and one I enjoyed reading... nicely done!! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
very lovely my friend. . . you know I love a good love story. . .  ------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you elizabeth, pat and sven...glad you all enjoyed.. ~Victoria~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This almost sounds like a happy ending. But what would I know about that.. Very lovely poem, though. Sandra |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful...James |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Beautifully told story, Victoria...great to see ya 'round here again! sp  can I see my world without you in it? |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Victoria, A fantastic and meaningful write. I loved each and every line. Well done Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Hi my dearPoetFriendVictoria, I gotta tell ya I enjoyed reading this sweetly-spun romantic tale... Gosh it gave me a couple of sighs at the end... Hugs2Usweetie *~coco~* |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you so very much...nice of you to peek in today..Hugss ~Victoria~ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is lovely, Victoria! So is your new pic! |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Nice story, enjoyed. Throw your heart out in front of you |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you denise..nice of you to say..thanks for peeking in shadow...glad you enjoyed..thank you for reading.. ~Victoria~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
A lovely romantic story and I like your new picture too! ~*Homepage*~ http://www.mysteria-poetry.cityslide.com/contents/contents.cfm/722155 |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Sharon..happy you enjoyed..nice to hear from you... ~Victoria~ |
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