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Midnight Gypsy
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Midnight Gypsy |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Let me light this torch and set with it my touch to warm skin long cooled from lack of heated want In this flickering light our shadows join just as I desire to merge with the center of you let them dance and record this meeting for the music they hear is to be ours sighed pleasure replacing the void left in this soul with the essence of you swaying swish of skirt swirl as legs uncovered beckon eyes to travel hem lines flare buttons loosed from eyelets designed to hold heaving tops revealed as in bend you touch me asking me to come in |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Okay? If I must be first? I'm claiming this one as my own...  sensual and downright, um, INSPIRING... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(smiling) Always nice to know you inspire someone... nice to know indeed... ( laughing) |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
This "torch" you carry makes for a compelling read....I enjoyed this very much, and I would take Serenity's place, but she won't move over....{smiling} |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Well you know... since we are dancing by torch light, who is to say that it isn't a beach party..and we can all enjoy the flickering light..and dream our own dreams as we are seduced by the shadows..and our memories? Thanks for the comment...it is greatly appreciated.. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
oh, I like this very very much!  very....."I know you, I walked with you once upon a dream" |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Very Good!! I like this one Thank You |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I want to watch this show...James |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Oh My! You've gone and done it C! You've written sultry passion to a T! Can I play the tamborine for you guys? I promise not to peep The next full moon Okay!Sincerely, Regina |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
I loved this one, very sensual. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Ron, you rascal, you've got the natives restless |
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poetsguild Member
since 2001-08-12
Posts 85Florida |
Very sultry. Leads us almost to the point of no return. Nicely done. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
YES!! YES!! How do I get to the front of the line? Dance Me!! ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I refuse to get into this because all I've got is a bottle of shampoo. Now cut that out!! I'm referring to that sultry commercial selling shampoo with all the heart throbs doing up the lather...I've just the bottle. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CPatHair~ *smiles* 'swaying swish of skirt swirl as legs uncovered beckon eyes to travel hem lines flare Delightful play of thought~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Gwendrina Junior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 33 |
Hi Cpat hair, The title drew me in immediately, (I have Slavic gyspy blood in my family lineage) and the words that follow are both sensual and beautifully tender with a hint of intrigue. Nice Work!! Wendy |
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GracefullyPoetic Junior Member
since 2001-08-23
Posts 14AZ, USA |
Cpat Hair: "May I just say that you are an incredibly gifted poet? This poem was filled with more passion than any poem I have read i think. It combined passion, with lust, and lust with love. i hope that you continue to inspire us with your many poems, as I would love to read some more of your works. This was a very awesome piece of poetry! It had so much emotion into it, and the imagery was great!Thank you for sharing this remarkeable piece with us!
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Delicious, can I play? Sandra |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Touching indeed, Cap'n...  |
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illusion Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 296 |
Sultry and sensuous and very well written. |
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