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Cpat Hair
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0 posted 2001-08-22 09:08 AM


Let me light
this torch and set
with it my touch
to warm skin
long cooled from lack
of heated want

In this flickering light
our shadows join
just as I desire to merge
with the center of you

let them dance
and record this meeting
for the music they hear
is to be ours

sighed
pleasure replacing
  the void
   left in this soul
     with the essence of you

swaying
  swish of skirt swirl
   as legs uncovered beckon
    eyes to travel hem lines flare

buttons loosed
from eyelets designed to hold
  heaving tops revealed as in bend

you touch me

asking me

to come

in


© Copyright 2001 Cpat Hair - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2001-08-22 09:16 AM


Okay? If I must be first? I'm claiming this one as my own... sensual and downright, um, INSPIRING...
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2 posted 2001-08-22 09:27 AM


(smiling) Always nice to know you inspire someone... nice to know indeed... ( laughing)


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3 posted 2001-08-22 09:37 AM



This "torch" you carry makes for a compelling read....I enjoyed this very much, and I would take Serenity's place, but she won't move over....{smiling}

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4 posted 2001-08-22 09:39 AM


Well you know... since we are dancing by torch light, who is to say that it isn't a beach party..and we can all enjoy the flickering light..and dream our own dreams as we are seduced by the shadows..and our memories?

Thanks for the comment...it is greatly appreciated..


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5 posted 2001-08-22 09:40 AM


oh, I like this very very much!   very.....

"I know you, I walked with you once upon a dream"

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6 posted 2001-08-22 09:44 AM


Very Good!!  I like this one

           Thank You
         ~~~Connie~~~

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7 posted 2001-08-22 02:54 PM


I want to watch this show...James
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8 posted 2001-08-22 06:22 PM


Oh My! You've gone and done it C! You've written sultry passion to a T! Can I play the tamborine for you guys? I promise not to peep   The next full moon Okay!

Sincerely,
Regina

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9 posted 2001-08-22 06:51 PM


I loved this one, very sensual.
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10 posted 2001-08-22 07:26 PM


Ron, you rascal, you've got the natives restless
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11 posted 2001-08-22 07:40 PM


Very sultry. Leads us almost to the point of no return.

Nicely done.

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12 posted 2001-08-22 08:50 PM


YES!! YES!! How do I get to the front of the line? Dance Me!!

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

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13 posted 2001-08-22 11:52 PM


I refuse to get into this because all I've got is a bottle of shampoo.


Now cut that out!! I'm referring to that sultry commercial selling shampoo with all the heart throbs doing up the lather...I've just the bottle.

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14 posted 2001-08-23 12:16 PM


CPatHair~
*smiles*

'swaying
  swish of skirt swirl
   as legs uncovered beckon
    eyes to travel hem lines flare


Delightful play of thought~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                   noles1@totcon.com            

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15 posted 2001-08-23 12:38 PM


Hi Cpat hair,

The title drew me in immediately, (I have Slavic gyspy blood in my family lineage) and
the words that follow are both sensual and beautifully tender with a hint of intrigue.

Nice Work!!

Wendy

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16 posted 2001-08-23 01:42 PM


Cpat Hair: "May I just say that you are an incredibly gifted poet? This poem was filled with more passion than any poem I have read i think. It combined passion, with lust, and lust with love. i hope that you continue to inspire us with your many poems, as I would love to read some more of your works.



This was a very awesome piece of poetry! It had so much emotion into it, and the imagery was great!Thank you for sharing this remarkeable piece with us!


    -- Heather

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The Shores of Alone
17 posted 2001-08-23 08:31 PM


Delicious, can I play?
Sandra

Nan
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18 posted 2001-08-24 08:48 AM


Touching indeed, Cap'n...

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19 posted 2001-08-24 11:06 AM


Sultry and sensuous and very well written.  
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