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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
They were intense talks Rambling on for hours we spoke, Solving nothing, but baring slivers of soul One to other as we searched in wending winding eyes For a reflection of love. Innocent wisdoms Naively woven into philosophies filled with Pomegranate seeds of truth, exchanged Until eyes filled with the sea began to drip leading hearts eager to expel shadows, needing to be cradled Into rocking slowly forwards and back The first touch A stroke of hair from face changed the tide words no longer enough, a gentle holding Stroked soul fed longing to deny the fact we are born alone We live alone inside I remember… Shy touch of hopeful merging Gentle words whispered as promises of always Panted yearnings Risky hidings from prying eyes, praying for one more time But tides change While sea waves still crash on rocky shores Stranded boats lie half aside Waiting once again for full moons pull [This message has been edited by Cpat Hair (edited 08-24-2001).] |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Your poetry becomes a little more intriguing with each passing day... I quite enjoyed this one...thank you! |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
"Innocent wisdoms Naively woven into philosophies filled with Pomegranate seeds of truth, exchanged Until eyes filled with the sea began to drip leading hearts eager to expel shadows, needing to be cradled Rock slowly forwards and back" *sigh* this has touched me...you have written so beautifully. The imagery and the flow have been masterfully employed....you are truly talented. And then ending of this is just perfect: "But tides change While sea waves still crash on rocky shores Stranded boats lie half aside Waiting once again for full moons pull" and again - *sigh* ....this is so true. Amazing write... ~Krista |
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