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Cpat Hair
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0 posted 2001-08-24 09:56 AM


They were intense talks
Rambling on for hours we spoke,
Solving nothing, but baring slivers of soul
One to other as we searched in wending winding eyes
For a reflection of love.

Innocent wisdoms
Naively woven into philosophies
filled with Pomegranate seeds of truth, exchanged
Until eyes filled with the sea began to drip
leading hearts eager to expel shadows,
needing to be cradled
Into rocking slowly
forwards and back

The first touch
A stroke of hair from face changed the tide
words no longer enough, a gentle holding
Stroked soul fed longing to deny the fact we are born alone
We live alone inside

I remember…
Shy touch of hopeful merging
Gentle words whispered as promises of always
Panted yearnings
Risky hidings from prying eyes, praying for one more time

But tides change
While sea waves still crash on rocky shores
Stranded boats lie half aside
Waiting once again for full moons pull

[This message has been edited by Cpat Hair (edited 08-24-2001).]

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Decaflame
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since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635

1 posted 2001-08-24 10:00 AM



Your poetry becomes a little more intriguing with each passing day...

I quite enjoyed this one...thank you!

SmittenKitten
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since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet
2 posted 2001-08-24 10:55 AM


"Innocent wisdoms
Naively woven into philosophies
filled with Pomegranate seeds of truth, exchanged
Until eyes filled with the sea began to drip
leading hearts eager to expel shadows,
needing to be cradled
Rock slowly forwards and back"


*sigh*  this has touched me...you have written so beautifully.  The imagery and the flow have been masterfully employed....you are truly talented.  And then ending of this is just perfect:

"But tides change
While sea waves still crash on rocky shores
Stranded boats lie half aside
Waiting once again for full moons pull"


and again - *sigh* ....this is so true.

Amazing write...
~Krista
  

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