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Keeper Of The Flame
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Keeper Of The Flame |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Keeper Of The Flame you light my heart’s fire the keeper of the flame no silence in the shout no longer to be tame and if silence be golden let this be bright red ignited now within it’s blaze let burning words be said "...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
very powerful...nicely done!  Cindi |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OneSlickLady~ And you knew this one would call my name~ How beautifully expressed~ *hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Sometimes I think that the sun is the whole of everyone... every person holding flame we are all sun...we're all the same.  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done and I love the turn of phrase at the end...as usual..I am impressed..and I enjoyed |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Very nice... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderfully done helen. . . the flame will always show. . . --------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
This is almost scary, it's said with such resolution. Usually I am distracted by the use of color but here it worked well. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Most awesome Helen! Excellent use of a metaphor with great flow, rhyme and charisma that only you possess~ Can I be your #1 fan?!  Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... it is a song that rises from a bleeding wound...or a smiling mouth" ~Kahlil Gibran~ [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 08-21-2001).] |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Yes, there's nothing like a passionate burning love, Enjoyed very much. Throw your heart out in front of you And run out to catch it. ARAB PROVERB [This message has been edited by shadow974 (edited 08-21-2001).] |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
this is awasome..... so this keeper lights your fire...  Parker |
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