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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore 
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someone pointlessly surfs recklessly clicks hesitantly types swiftly deletes mechanically functions~ a wan smile now and then a weary look at his watch here and there it takes him two hours to mount the courage to write some nonsensical verse on the whim that he might make himself feel better but the words are forming, the poet can't care less, his skin is peeling off, his inner core is revealing and someone, a coward, is running [This message has been edited by faterider (edited 08-22-2001).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Faterider, Serious stuff and interesting, enjoyed. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very interesting the way theimages created capture the tone..delivery the last lines with strength... nicely written... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Smiling...you write the process so well. And I still can't stand to watch someone's face as they read my work...thank gawd for the internet...now I just post, duck, and run!!! But you've no need for fear here with this one. Marvelous!!! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Amen. Well done indeed!  Homepage : http://members.home.net/excalibur2501/interloper.htm |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
to write some nonsensical verse on the whim that he might make himself feel better but the words are forming, the poet can't care less, his skin is peeling off, his inner core is revealing and someone, a coward, is running =============================== well this makes perfect sense to me.... a vivid and powerfully honest write here and you have indeed captured the process for many... and this proves...your not a coward...youre a poet well done K, good to see you posting again. take care jm Feels like Im dancin with truth and wisdom |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Like this one! |
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Topheth Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 297Texas |
Very nice and well put - I fell into this within the first few lines. |
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