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Dedication (to the Goddess)
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Dedication (to the Goddess) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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the moon shines tonight in an indigo sky like a beacon of everlasting hope to a world that has forgotten its power it is to this place that I have been called by ones that are greater than I by ones that have moved through my life since I was young and just beginning in this world they have guided my steps and directed my ways they now call me again to make that final dedication to give that last part of myself to them, so that I might be one with them so that they might be one with me it is to them and to their power that I now dedicate all that I am, and all that I will be By the moon above and surrounding night I give thanks to the Goddess of my heart Forever to be welcomed in her light I will to her my final journey start By the moon above and surrounding night I give thanks to the Goddess of my soul Forever to be loved in her heart’s sight She will be the one to make my heart whole Goddesses of the moon and of the night Into your gentle hands I place my own Give to me, I ask, your Spiritual might That I may always continue to grow the moon becomes brighter in my sight and a voice rings out across the sky “Arise my son, arise and see See that you are now one with us As we are one with thee Find in our heart, find in our soul That which you have sought for so long Will now make your heart whole” then was her secret revealed to me that she is not one, but many she is Isis and Hera she is Diana and Kuan Yin she is Hecate and Mary she is you and her spirit resides deep within the spirit of birth and life the spirit of love and healing and it is this spirit that I will serve as son, brother, husband and father every time I hear her cry every time I see your eyes every time I feel you sigh I am yours Goddess, now and forever. . . Namaste. . . ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 08-31-2001).] |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Wow! Celestial inspiration. I notice that your head is often up and that's a good thing. Enjoyed |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
A wonderful accomplishment on your 11,000th post! Congratulations, Sven! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sven, I love everything you write...but, this one just took my breath away! Incredible write my friend and congratulations on your 11,000th post. Namaste! May love bless your way! The good and peace in me greet the good and peace in thee. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*sigh.....oh Sven I love it when you paint words of art.... (((hugs))) Charisma |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Art Indeed!!!! Beautiful! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
You are good Sven...indeed...James |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Ohh, Beautiful Heart.  You have done a wonderful job with this. I love your stories like this.  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
ah...I save this one to read to the girls...*wink* Thank you, friend, Sven! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sven, this is just awesome, I love the whole story telling quality, and the theme, one dear to my heart. Wonderful! Sandra |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Sven this is magick! It is truly beautiful. It moved my soul and the Goddess's soul. Sven, would you allow me to put this on my web site on the poetry page????? Absolutely breathtaking Thanks Isis *The greatest warrior is one that does not need to fight* ~Isis~ |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Congrats on your 11000th too!  I was to excited to remember to mention it earlier!! LOL Brilliant as always my friend.. Isis *The greatest warrior is one that does not need to fight* ~Isis~ |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Sven...sigh...beautiful...sigh...lovely...yes truly inspired! Janette |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
ahh...magically delicious. Love it Sven! Hugs, ~Krista  "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
RS, I've been learning to keep my head up. . . and it's been a good thing. . . thank you. . . Lady, thank you my friend. . . this one's been a long time coming. . . Enchantress, thank you. . . and may the blessings of all shine upon your every step and your every word. . . Charisma, I've been trying my friend. . . thank you for seeing the art in this. . . Zinsser, thank you so much my friend. . . glad that you enjoyed. . . James, I have learned from the best my friend. . . thank you for being there. . . Temptress, my wonderful friend. . . the stories have always been there. . . it just takes them a while to come out. . . thank you. . .  serenity, my friend, I hoped that you would read this one. . . and I'm glad that you're going to save it. . . I'm getting there my friend. . . I'm getting there. . .  Sandra, the theme is one that is fast becoming dear to my heart as well my friend. . .thank you for your words. . . Isis, as magickal as you are my friend. . . many thanks to you for your kindness and your friendship. . . it would be my honor. . . Janette, I'll take that to mean that you really like it!!  Thank you my friend. . . Krista, thank you so much for reading!! ---------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed it a lot |
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Jaime Fradera Senior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 843Where no tyranny is tolerable |
This is such a vision of such rare and architypal beauty... to see ... and to be with her, too, in Dream, in f antasy and Night. I'd best get off the computer, for I have long since gone to sleep---- but not before I add this one to my Favorites page. Jaime When the going gets tough, everyydoby leaves! Jaime |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
This is beautiful Sven. I love the story you have told. alan |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
vandana, thank you my friend. . . Jamie, thank you. . . it's a vision too long not seen. . . Alan, thank you my friend. . .it's a story that's just beginning. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
I'm bumping this beauty up to the top where it belongs! Excellent, Sven Pen! Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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