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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Alone I stand alone, uniquely me, no aid or support, just alone and free from the range of your arms, the touch of your grasp narrow in thoughts, I am in contrast. Independently me, I am solitaire a diamond though rough, needs shaping and care. On the ridge of my life, drugged by the feel waiting alone, I am singularly real. Always Loving Only Nothing's Easy just a play on a few words.... ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 08-22-2001).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
like the play of words...and like the poem.. and if always loving.. though nothing is easy... you will find the peace and the love you too deserve... |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
NT..I really like this. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy  |
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Wes Utica Junior Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 28California |
This lovely poem mimics your "handle" - naked thoughts. You've opened your mind and laid bare your innermost thoughts - a dangerous, but courageous thing to do, when so many poets hide such poems in their desk's lap drawer. |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Open and tenderly write this ones a gem. Throw your heart out in front of you |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
...I am solitaire! Always knew you were a gem! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Rough? Nay, finely polished and many faceted. Sparkling in the moonlight and dazzling in the sunlight, that is Maureen |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
C-thank you for your kindness...I know it's there..somewhere for me. Alan- thank you for stopping to read, glad you liked *s vandana- thanx Wes-I am really happy to see you here..I was just a bit sulking when I wrote this.. some days are like that, you know..hugss and thank you for visiting my thoughts...naked or dressed up *s Maureen shadow974-your words plase me *s thank you Decaflame-cute you are.. thank you *s Interloper-you are very sweet, thank you. hugs to you all for bringing a smile to my face this evening. ~Wynter/Maureen "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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