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Chocolate Eyes |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Her chocolate eyes and ruby lips await his next arrival His eyes of peridot can see the love awaiting, carnal. Still eyes seek out his eyes alone but seems his are not seeing She takes a look into his soul not sure who he is being. The man of passion,love,and fire? or the one of frigid ice He's both, and then he's neither one The mystery of her life... [This message has been edited by catalinamoon (edited 08-21-2001).] |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
A love in waiting..wonderful read..I like the part about being of ice. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
A mystery exists to be solved. Great write, here. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Oh S, look at this. (and you). I'm just here shaking my head. I like what Duncan had to say about mysteries existing to be solved.  . *Peace you. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Chocolate eyes and ruby lips...sounds so enticing...James |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Melting with mystery! Great imagery! Such is that of cravings, and need for fulfillment. Well done Sandra. Sincerely, Regina |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nicely done... mysterious in that it is a slice..just enough to let us guess and build around it our own stories...to ponder the facts and or emotions that lead up to this.... good stuff... and I enjoyed! |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
A heart of fire......or that of ice..... The contradictions make the mystery.....but then isn't it the mystery that seem to attract...... A wonderful well-done piece....... Thank you **************************** "Oh...me!Oh Life! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Now, just who does this guy think he is ... acting like a woman (ooops) Enjoyable read that was well written |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Interloper women NEVER act like that We know for sure what we want! Sandra |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Hello again! The first stanza brought back some very vivid and welcome memories while the second two reminded me of times to which I could relate and would rather let drift away in the space of the mind's recesses... Just reafirms the fact that the more I learn of human beings -- the less I understand them. (I do miss this -- if only there were more time to alot to all there is to do!) -MVS "It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself." |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Delicious... in many aspects. Most imaginative as well as musical. Lovely. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
oh Sandra, I could start something here with your commment that women know what they want. . . lol  but. . . I will instead tell you that this is a wonderful poem. . .and it looks like I'm not the only one inspired by green these days. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sandra, This man just cannot "see".......Beautiful.... Love, Elise |
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