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catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2001-08-21 11:16 PM


Her chocolate eyes and ruby lips
await his next arrival
His eyes of peridot can see
the love awaiting, carnal.

Still eyes seek out his eyes alone
but seems his are not seeing
She takes a look into his soul
not sure who he is being.

The man of passion,love,and fire?
or the one of frigid ice
He's both, and then he's neither one
The mystery of her life...

[This message has been edited by catalinamoon (edited 08-21-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Sandra - All Rights Reserved
Alan
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right next door
1 posted 2001-08-21 11:28 PM


A love in waiting..wonderful read..I like the part about being of ice.
Duncan
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2 posted 2001-08-21 11:32 PM


A mystery exists to be solved.  Great write, here.
SpitFire
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3 posted 2001-08-21 11:46 PM


~Oh S, look at this. (and you). I'm just here shaking my head. I like what Duncan had to say about mysteries existing to be solved.  . *Peace you.
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2001-08-22 03:00 AM


Chocolate eyes and ruby lips...sounds so enticing...James
rwood
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Tennessee
5 posted 2001-08-22 07:13 AM


Melting with mystery! Great imagery! Such is that of cravings, and need for fulfillment.
Well done Sandra.  

Sincerely,
Regina

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6 posted 2001-08-22 08:45 AM


very nicely done... mysterious in that it is a slice..just enough to let us guess and build around it our own stories...to ponder the facts and or emotions that lead up to this.... good stuff... and I enjoyed!
MyEnchanted_Melody
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
7 posted 2001-08-22 08:54 AM





A heart of fire......or that of ice.....

The contradictions make the mystery.....but then isn't it the mystery that seem to attract......

A wonderful well-done piece.......

Thank you
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"Oh...me!Oh Life!
Of the questions of these recurring..........
Of myself forever reproaching myself,
for who more foolish than I......"
~Whitman~

Interloper
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Deep in the heart
8 posted 2001-08-22 08:57 AM


Now, just who does this guy think he is ... acting like a woman (ooops)  
Enjoyable read that was well written  

http://members.home.net/excalibur2501/interloper.htm

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
9 posted 2001-08-22 09:04 AM


Interloper women NEVER act like that  
We know for sure what we want!
Sandra

MARK V SHELDON
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10 posted 2001-08-22 11:19 AM


Hello again!

The first stanza brought back some very vivid and welcome memories while the second two reminded me of times to which I could relate and would rather let drift away in the space of the mind's recesses...  Just reafirms the fact that the more I learn of human beings -- the less I understand them.  (I do miss this -- if only there were more time to alot to all there is to do!)

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS


MoonShadow
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Dark side of the Moon.
11 posted 2001-08-23 04:22 AM


Delicious... in many aspects. Most imaginative as well as musical. Lovely.
Sven
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12 posted 2001-08-23 11:59 AM


oh Sandra, I could start something here with your commment that women know what they want. . . lol  

but. . . I will instead tell you that this is a wonderful poem. . .and it looks like I'm not the only one inspired by green these days. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

athena4
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13 posted 2001-08-23 08:58 PM


Sandra,
       This man just cannot "see".......Beautiful....
         Love, Elise

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