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Open Poetry #15

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Trina
Member

since 2001-06-28

Posts 97

0 posted 2001-08-21 05:10 PM

Keep dreaming , keep living
and never let a dream die
for you will only live
when your dream is alive

Don't waste time,don't waste dreams
take advantage by all means
for your dreams are screaming out
and your life feeds on them

A dream gone bad
becomes a nightmare
a life gone bad
becomes hell

Don't become a victim
of reality.

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

1 posted 2001-08-21 06:11 PM

There is a loud lesson here, but there is something else it makes me think of. It makes me think that while we can't become victims of reality, we cannot forever live unrealistically.

Enjoyed!

Trina
Member

since 2001-06-28

Posts 97

2 posted 2001-08-21 08:30 PM

Hmm... very interesting point Temptress. I don't know what was actually on my mind when I wrote this I just started typing anything and this is what I came up with and I didn't fully understand what I wrote but I'm liking what other people are coming up with after reading it. Thanx for reading

Take care,

Trina

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