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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 2001-08-20 09:50 PM


In the Company of Thought


Words yet unborn await to touch the tip of feather quill
A pen that dare not sketch the silhouette of my malaise
With voiceless ink too thin to scroll my sorrow with its fill
Too heavy is my grief to be the burden of a phrase

Nor do I have the sweet finesse, the words of powdered lace
To sprinkle wings of moth with butterfly’s translucent hues
And flutter sorrow in the breeze with wind against its face
A wing of beauty masking pain in irridescent blues

I’d rather that my quill glide on the tip of eagle wings
that trace the circles gracefully in clouds of my despair
And rain the inky words around imaginary rings
Too burdensome my grief to be suspended in the air

The silent ink is stirring in the bossom of its wells
And reaches to my core to find a phrase not yet concieved
My weary hand too weak to lift a feather as it swells
To lay upon a virgin page the loss that I have grieved

My pen dare not attempt to sketch this web in which I'm caught
And so I sit in silence in the company of thought

Elizabeth Santos

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1 posted 2001-08-20 10:09 PM


Stunning!  Your "silence" screams your wonderful talent to us.  Thank you.

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Elizabeth Santos
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2 posted 2001-08-20 11:11 PM


Thank you, Interloper for your enthusiastic remark
Thanks for reading
Liz

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