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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
I lie curled up in a ball Exhausted from giving my all Feeling a sense of release My body relaxes in peace My muscles are no longer tense From life’s recent events My mind is now at ease There is no one here to tease My emotions have been spent Since my heart was bent Now the healing begins And my face wears a grin I sleep throughout the night No longer filled with fright The hours gently pass As quietly as Sunday Mass My lips say a prayer As often as I dare Begging of the Son To make the pieces one They were scattered about As I let out a shout Reeling from the pain Of regret's awful strain I feel it no more Its weight I bore I now can see It wasn’t all me You played a part In destroying my heart Tangled up in lies Trying to disguise I was never fooled Our love slowly cooled Until none was left Leaving me bereft I gave my all In spite of it all To no avail Deceit prevails Time for the past To be buried at last I move into the sun My mourning is done A new day dawns I’m not your pawn I live for only me In sweet tranquility All writing comes |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Nicely done, LW! I love the victory in this! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
well done and glad you got a good night's sleep BRAVO [This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 08-10-2001).] |
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Snooganzmeister32 Member
since 2001-07-17
Posts 67Cali, USA |
This was really... somewhere in the middle of disturbing, sad, and lovely all at the same time. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Time for the past To be buried at last I move into the sun My mourning is done Ahh LW, Now THIS is the best part of all. very proud of you..very gentle smile |
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shadow of the fall Member
since 2001-08-13
Posts 83Indiana |
when the past hurts so bad you have to look to the future. Good for you! Karen |
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KaziaRose Junior Member
since 2001-08-18
Posts 14Australia |
Lone Wolf~ A very emotional write, you sound like you have finally set yourself free...here's to freedom and destiny ~Kaz~ A mellifluous muse lies within this poet |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoneWolf~ 'I move into the sun My mourning is done A new day dawns' What a wonderful morning with no mourning~ Beautifully said~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Wonderful! Give all your cares to Him. Beautiful piece, just beautiful... |
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