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Jaime Fradera Senior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 843Where no tyranny is tolerable |
Sleep 1: I found you in my dreams, in a place of weightless floating where I somehow new that you would be. To sooth my pain you came to me, you tall, you lush and gentle amazon, hauntingly, impossibly beautiful; and I was nude. 2: You told me that you knew me, Knew of my passion, longing and desire. You said that you had met me years ago. You kept insisting that you knew me, that you KNEW me. You kept insisting it was I who had not notieced or could not remember. and you kept saying that one day I finally would. 3: You came to me. With strong and gentle arms you TOOK me, and you were nude, and no one ever came to me like that! You thrust a scrap of paper in my hand, left a long and gentle kiss upon my mouth, then, vannishing, you woke me, and my eyes were filled with tears. Jaime |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jaime~ Very nicely done~ Sort of a longing that doesn't go away~ You touched it gently~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
WOW! This is really neat! Beautiful job!  Cindi |
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Secret Whisper Member
since 2001-01-25
Posts 298Through the Looking Glass |
Extemely passionate. You have a lovely writing style and are very poetic in your description of this other person: "amazon". Beautiful. "We also know how cruel the truth often is, and we wonder whether delusion is not more consoling."- Henri Poincare (1854-1912) |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Well done Jaime! LOved the imagery! |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Jaime - You do indeed have a way of 'seeing' things as none else can.. I truly enjoy reading your work.. Visit us often, my friend..  |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Ah sweet one...what dreams you dream...all of me (giggle just kidding) |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Jaime that was terrific, you described the woman so perfectly that I could imagine her. p.s. sending you a link to listen to as well.  |
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