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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-08-20 04:14 PM



you are my desire
my alpha and omega
you are all things good
my senses charged by your love
you are the sum of my life

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Lady In White
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1 posted 2001-08-20 04:15 PM



It's been awhile since we've seen the smite of your pen....

well done, and enjoyed!

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2 posted 2001-08-20 04:22 PM


This just sums it up very nicely done, sweet expressions of your heart.
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3 posted 2001-08-20 05:00 PM


yes..it has been a while.. just where in the world do you think you have been??? Huh????

( laughing)

Alpha and Omega

nicely said....


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4 posted 2001-08-20 05:04 PM


Lady ~ Thank you.   I missed being here.

Gemini ~ How sweet of you

Ron ~ Requirements of work, mostly.  Will not be around much for a while ... I long to be back and read all your good work.  Thanx  

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5 posted 2001-08-20 07:00 PM


Your words always express so well and with so few words you have penned a universe of thought.  Wonderful Tanka and nice to find one of yours today.
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6 posted 2001-08-21 09:10 PM



Gawd, I love this!  
Well done!~

Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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with you
7 posted 2001-08-21 10:55 PM


"you are the sum of my life"

SIGH  

gorgeous!

"I know you, I walked with you once upon a dream"

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8 posted 2001-08-22 08:55 AM


Mark~
Thank you for the wonderful comment.  You are always a welcome visitor here

Melissa ~
Gee, thanx

SEA ~
Golly whoppers   I'm speechless ...

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9 posted 2001-08-22 05:13 PM


enjoy
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10 posted 2001-08-22 06:41 PM


This is one of those poems that EVERYONE wishes were written for them. Simple but beautiful.  
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11 posted 2001-08-22 06:46 PM


Great to be loved and love that way.
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12 posted 2001-08-22 07:11 PM


Vandana ~ Thanks for the visit

serenity ~ You are so gracious   Thanx.

walker ~ Ya think?     Thanks for the read

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