. . . You are my desire . . . Tanka

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Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-08-20 04:14 PM

you are my desire
my alpha and omega
you are all things good
my senses charged by your love
you are the sum of my life

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Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

1 posted 2001-08-20 04:15 PM

It's been awhile since we've seen the smite of your pen....

well done, and enjoyed!

Gemini
Senior Member

since 1999-12-15

Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA

2 posted 2001-08-20 04:22 PM

This just sums it up very nicely done, sweet expressions of your heart.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2001-08-20 05:00 PM

yes..it has been a while.. just where in the world do you think you have been??? Huh????

( laughing)

Alpha and Omega

nicely said....

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2001-08-20 05:04 PM

Lady ~ Thank you. I missed being here.

Gemini ~ How sweet of you

Ron ~ Requirements of work, mostly. Will not be around much for a while ... I long to be back and read all your good work. Thanx

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

5 posted 2001-08-20 07:00 PM

Your words always express so well and with so few words you have penned a universe of thought. Wonderful Tanka and nice to find one of yours today.

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

6 posted 2001-08-21 09:10 PM

Gawd, I love this!

Well done!~

Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

7 posted 2001-08-21 10:55 PM

"you are the sum of my life"

SIGH

gorgeous!

"I know you, I walked with you once upon a dream"

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

8 posted 2001-08-22 08:55 AM

Mark~
Thank you for the wonderful comment. You are always a welcome visitor here

Melissa ~
Gee, thanx

SEA ~
Golly whoppers

I'm speechless ...

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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

9 posted 2001-08-22 05:13 PM

enjoy

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

10 posted 2001-08-22 06:41 PM

This is one of those poems that EVERYONE wishes were written for them. Simple but beautiful.

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

11 posted 2001-08-22 06:46 PM

Great to be loved and love that way.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

12 posted 2001-08-22 07:11 PM

Vandana ~ Thanks for the visit

serenity ~ You are so gracious

Thanx.

walker ~ Ya think?

Thanks for the read

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