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vandana
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0 posted 2001-08-22 12:57 PM


Should I tell you
how much I love you,
Should I say the words,
I was longing to tell you,
For a long time,
Should I love you
Or should I say goodbye,
When you even don't care,
I should love you
Because Iknow,
this love would last,
Should I stay
Or should I leave,
My heart has a feeling
for you,
A feeling that Is deep,
A feeling that Is strong,
I have been never wrong
to you before,
You know,
I still love you,
That is why
It Is hard for me
to decide what to do?
Should I
Or I should ,
I don't know
what to say?
It's hard for me
Cause Inside my heart,
I have deep feeling ,
A feeling that can't be deny,
So that is why
It Is hard for me
to tell you these words to you,
Should I love you
Or should I say goodbye
I should stay ,
In which way,
I should decide
I think
I will follow what my heart
tells me

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Decaflame
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since 2001-05-11
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1 posted 2001-08-22 01:27 PM



Good idea!  Enjoyed this!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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2 posted 2001-08-22 04:49 PM


When I have strong feelings for someone it is almost impossible for me not to act accordingly...James
Denise
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3 posted 2001-08-22 07:12 PM


Follow your heart! Nice to see you again, Vandana! This would make a great song!
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4 posted 2001-08-22 07:16 PM


Yes, you should
Well done indeed.

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