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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Gentle brush feather touch of skin or silk on skin to remind me I am desired No reason but wanting us Why do I have to ask? Absence no fonder heart needs wait on under breath mutterings you can not hear from there I reach but fingers and feelings far too short to grasp comfort end in cupped palmed begging Touch me? wondering if my touch is as empty as my hands |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well done my friend. Does desire exceed our grasp and are feelings limited to tactile ecnounters? This is Monday and I really didn't want to think this hard ... now I gotta go contemplate my navel again ...  |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
With poetry like this, your hands should never be empty...and this, Sir, shall fill many a heart... well done... |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
your words are so strong and so soft at the same time...don't know how you do it... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Ah, this feels so lonely to me. Nice write, full of emotion. Sandra |
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poetsguild Member
since 2001-08-12
Posts 85Florida |
Why do I have to ask? Why, indeed? Touch is the one thing that reminds us why we're here. Enjoyed this. |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Cpat, Magic in here. Well done. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
If this poem were a sound, I would hear it as a trains distant whistle through a dark, quiet night. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Wow! and WowWow!!! I reach but fingers and feelings far too short to grasp comfort end in cupped palmed begging Touch me? wondering if my touch is as empty as my hands |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Cpat-I feel such honest emotion in this poem...it is good! |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Others must give too, to keep us from always coming up empty handed. For this is the result of longing from a very abundant heart. Sometimes people become comfortably numb. Leaving others to think they've nothing to offer. I don't believe that in you C. No way! Sincerely, Regina |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
wondering if my touch is as empty as my hands Some mighty deep words, there, Captain. Corinne |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Great poem, Capt. Throw your heart out in front of you |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Greetings once more, Ron! I do miss your poetry -- just been called to Life's attention lately... Once more, you have expressed so much with so little -- encapsulating an urgent need for acknowledgement and Love with but a few carefully crafted descriptions, true to "The Ron Style". Well done (and I'm still waiting to hear when your collection of poetry is due out so I can buy the first autographed copy!) "It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself." |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
wondering if my touch is as empty as my hands ====================== A powerful poem.......conveying such a lonely feeling..... Wonderful Ron..... Thank you ************************* "Oh...me!Oh Life! |
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