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Open Poetry #15

Inherent Thoughts

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

0 posted 2001-08-22 05:42 PM

Inherent Thoughts

I thought once
of telling you
something
then I thought
twice, and
became
wary of
my own
mind

having tricked me once
waiting for the heart
to waver yet
again

how like my mind
to wend its way
along self
doubting

I thought once
of telling you
something

then I thought
twice, becoming
warier with
age, my
own
mind wandering
not yet siding
on dementia

other than
thinking of
you

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-08-22 05:54 PM

nicely ended... I enjoyed this look into self doubt...and our own brands of dementia..

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2001-08-22 06:05 PM

unecessary
words can mean so very much
thoughts mean so much more

RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

3 posted 2001-08-22 06:11 PM

"Silence is eloquence" (Cicero). On the other hand.... "..fools rush in.." on the other hand ..."Damn the torpedoes" Bob PS "What makes life so complicated?" (Deborah Kerr) "People?" (Cary Grant).

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