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Removal Processed - thanks, Nan

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

0 posted 2001-08-20 11:05 AM

Removal Processed

take the one
remove an ‘e’
to go on and on
continually

in response
one sees your light
then contemplates
that all is right

look around
we’re not alone
but for sound
we are home

there is no we
without an I
and with you
our one goes on

so in your me
I see my one
remove an “e”
to go on and on

Thanks to Nan for her inspiration in “Continuum”

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-08-20 11:19 AM

nice work..and insight... I enjoyed!!!

Inspiration can come from all sorts of places can't it...

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2001-08-20 02:35 PM

1derful! GR8! Fantabulous! Encore!
BRAVA!
Author!
By the way, I really liked this

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2001-08-20 07:35 PM

Have I told you lately I adore the way your mind works?
very very cool...write ON poetess Deca

Feels like Im dancin with truth and wisdom
Precious rhythm you are my guide
These days are sacred, my heart is humble
Oh warrior show me thy light

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