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A Dream Exists
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A Dream Exists |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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A Dream Exists A dream that has not yet been kissed Remains unseen, but does exist In visions that are undefined Imbedded in a dreamers mind It lives as sure as dawning light Erases moons and stars of night Forgotten in the daytime sun Remaining on the path they’ve spun Just as a tulip bulb will rest Beneath the snow in winter’s nest As warmth of sun and springtime mist Give life, so does a dream exist The flower lives and worries not Which season is, if cold or hot To stars that fly the Milky Way The day is night and night is day A dream is visible and clear Though not to eye or hand or ear It lives within the heart and mind As sure as rambling roses twine Just as the breeze remains unseen As barren trees will turn to green As stars will disappear at dawn As fairies sprint across the lawn Elizabeth Santos [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 08-19-2001).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Elizabeth! Truly lovely, your dreams will be with us always for you share them so very well! {second stanza, fourth line, small typo...} [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 08-19-2001).] |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Lovely work, Elizbeth! Corinne |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
wonderfully lilting! especially loved the ebullience of the last line! |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
A dream that has not yet been kissed Remains unseen, but does exist In visions that are undefined Imbedded in a dreamers mind Elizabeth, where would we be without our dreams? Lovely write.  Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Another epopee. A delight to read. Sy |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Wonderfully written, enjoyed, indeed where would we be without our dreams! Throw your heart out in front of you |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh you know I loved this one right? What better comparison of a dreaming waiting than a bulb waiting to flower, oh, you just have a way of making me smile! If you have but one true friend when you die you were truly blessed |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
This was pretty.. funny.. the dreams erase the moon and the stars, but then the new day and the sun erase the dream |
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