Open Poetry #15 |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
He is all to me and more yet not the least aware Of open heart still sighing I know not if he cares. With words, he revives my heart casually as rainfall Opens doors I tried to close Yes he is still my all. All of what, the sane would ask and I, without answers Only knowing needs remain though heart still be in tatters. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CatalinaMoon~ 'He is all to me and more' Kind of says it all, gal~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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shadow of the fall Member
since 2001-08-13
Posts 83Indiana |
all is good! all is what we need! Karen |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Tell him. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Spirits meet and sometimes they meld - the world turns round, the heavens dance; the spirits meet and sometimes only one feels the touch, but the world still turns round, the heavens still dance, if only for the one, and the one has to enjoy what little they have before the wind moves on - and then sometimes, the wind blows in a circle and worlds meet in splendid embrace... jwesley [This message has been edited by jwesley (edited 08-18-2001).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Thanks guys. R-I think he knows, I told him some time ago, but you know how it is.. James..so true that it is only when the world turns just right that we get to have the complete..And it seems a long time coming. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
With words, he revives my heart casually as rainfall Opens doors I tried to close Yes he is still my all. All of what, the sane would ask and I, without answers Only knowing needs remain though heart still be in tatters. You need only have answers for yourself. I related to this very much. |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
A heartfelt tribute. Thank you for sharing, it is lovely. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh I've been here before. Great write cat, very expressive. Yes you must tell him ~HUGS~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Amazing, how our hearts can survive and endure what they do, and still rise up smelling the roses when given the chance Rex |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I (being older) have had so many of these moments in my life, and I know this one well. This was a great write CM, and if he knows and loves you for you, then you really have something! Great job. If you have but one true friend when you die you were truly blessed |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sandra, I can SO relate.....I wish for you that you will get "All"....Beautiful write.. Love, Elise |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
If you have told him, and he still does not know. . . well, then. . . wonderful Sandra. . . --------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
If you told him and he still doesn't know or hasn't swept you off your feet, this man need psychiatric care!! |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sandra, Beautiful work here, sending a BIG HUG from Cal and thinking of you, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
This is so good Sandra! This says it all. No answers, just tatters, as casual as rainfall. Simply astounding in depth! Sincerely, Regina |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yes this is very good.. I enoyed a great deal. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
He is all to me and more yet not the least aware Of open heart still sighing I know not if he cares. ========================== I hope he'd realize it in his heart soon..... Wonderful beautiful write.... I loved it..... Thank you *************************** "Oh...me!Oh Life! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
That's how love goes. It's tricky stuff and it clings to a person just like luggage. Very simply expressed but done with the cleverness of the economy of words! |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Beautiful!!!! |
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