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catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2001-08-18 08:07 PM




He is all to me and more
yet not the least aware
Of open heart still sighing
I know not if he cares.

With words, he revives my heart
casually as rainfall
Opens doors I tried to close
Yes he is still my all.

All of what, the sane would ask
and I, without answers
Only knowing needs remain
though heart still be in tatters.

© Copyright 2001 Sandra - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-08-18 10:38 PM


CatalinaMoon~
'He is all to me and more'

Kind of says it all, gal~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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shadow of the fall
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2 posted 2001-08-18 10:44 PM


all is good!  all is what we need!

Karen

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3 posted 2001-08-18 10:59 PM


Tell him.
jwesley
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4 posted 2001-08-18 11:07 PM


Spirits meet and sometimes they meld - the world turns round, the heavens dance; the spirits meet and sometimes only one feels the touch, but the world still turns round, the heavens still dance, if only for the one, and the one has to enjoy what little they have before the wind moves on - and then sometimes, the wind blows in a circle and worlds meet in  splendid embrace...

jwesley

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catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
5 posted 2001-08-18 11:15 PM


Thanks guys. R-I think he knows, I told him some time ago, but you know how it is..
James..so true that it is only when the world turns just right that we get to have the complete..And it seems a long time coming.

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6 posted 2001-08-19 12:30 PM


With words, he revives my heart
casually as rainfall
Opens doors I tried to close
Yes he is still my all.

All of what, the sane would ask
and I, without answers
Only knowing needs remain
though heart still be in tatters.


You need only have answers for yourself.  I related to this very much.

MoonShadow
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7 posted 2001-08-19 07:40 AM


A heartfelt tribute. Thank you for sharing, it is lovely.
tracie66
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8 posted 2001-08-19 07:48 AM


Oh I've been here before. Great write cat, very expressive. Yes you must tell him
~HUGS~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Rex Allen McCoy
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9 posted 2001-08-19 10:44 AM


Amazing, how our hearts can survive and endure what they do, and still rise up smelling the roses when given the chance

Rex

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10 posted 2001-08-19 03:13 PM


I (being older) have had so many of these moments in my life, and I know this one well.  This was a great write CM, and if he knows and loves you for you, then you really have something!  Great job.

If you have but one true friend when you die you were truly blessed
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11 posted 2001-08-19 06:29 PM


Sandra,
     I can SO relate.....I wish for you that you will get "All"....Beautiful write..
           Love, Elise

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12 posted 2001-08-19 08:43 PM


If you have told him, and he still does not know. . . well, then. . .

wonderful Sandra. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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13 posted 2001-08-19 09:34 PM


If you told him and he still doesn't know or hasn't swept you off your feet, this man need psychiatric care!!  
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14 posted 2001-08-19 11:48 PM


Hi Sandra,

Beautiful work here, sending a BIG HUG from Cal and thinking of you,

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



rwood
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15 posted 2001-08-20 06:53 AM


This is so good Sandra! This says it all.  No answers, just tatters, as casual as rainfall. Simply astounding in depth!
Sincerely,
Regina

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16 posted 2001-08-20 08:59 AM


yes this is very good.. I enoyed a great deal.


MyEnchanted_Melody
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
17 posted 2001-08-20 09:00 AM




He is all to me and more
yet not the least aware
Of open heart still sighing
I know not if he cares.

==========================

I hope he'd realize it in his heart soon.....

Wonderful beautiful write....

I loved it.....

Thank you
***************************

"Oh...me!Oh Life!
Of the questions of these recurring..........
Of myself forever reproaching myself,
for who more foolish than I......"
~Whitman~

ethome
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18 posted 2001-08-20 09:02 AM


That's how love goes. It's tricky stuff and it clings to a person just like luggage. Very simply expressed but done with the cleverness of the economy of words!
Zinsser
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19 posted 2001-08-20 09:48 AM


Beautiful!!!!
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