Open Poetry #15 |
In Fall |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
In Fall I shall watch you as leaves in fall tumble to ground green they recall flirting between limbs harsh wind brushes silently disassembling secure tree hushes sap stopped in nocturnal sleep leaves pile freely careless heap "...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
green they recall... Like the desert misses the rain, to borrow a phrase. |
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shadow of the fall Member
since 2001-08-13
Posts 83Indiana |
my season....love it! Karen |
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KaziaRose Junior Member
since 2001-08-18
Posts 14Australia |
Nice soothing write, flowing ever so gently ~Kaz~ A mellifluous muse lies within this poet |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
sap stopped in nocturnal sleep leaves pile freely careless heap like the abstract quality of these lines.. leaving the reader to think and draw from it what they can... a leap in the way one might normally draw conclusions..they stand out in this poem.. I enjoyed |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Spring and Fall are my favourite seasons, and I love your imagery in this, a great tribute to Autumn Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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