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darabeth
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since 2001-02-17
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0 posted 2001-08-17 10:38 PM


I was 6 years old, when we learned the news.
How could something so bad happen to you?
I didn't understand the big words they said.
All night I cried while in the bed.

I heard them talking,though they didn't know.
Atop the stairs I heard the cries "No"!
They talked about "poor little" me.
How I would "take it",they just couldn't see.

For my mother has a rare spinal disease.
How would she or could she care for me.
The Dr.'s said she wouldn't live long.
This damn disease that's done her wrong.

I told her I wouldn't let her die.
Just then my mom began to cry.
She said she would have to be in a chair.
I told her that I didn't care.

It's been 25 years now since that day.
My mom's still here I'm proud to say.
She's a granni now (make that x3).
Her Dr.'s were wrong,she fought it for me.

This is for my mom who always said she would fight a circle saw just for me.I love you mom!
               Dara Beth

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dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
1 posted 2001-08-17 10:46 PM


thats awesome dara beth... gave me chills--the love of a mother..  

very cool..

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

in front of total strangers will ya kiss me..
flowers for no reason but you miss me..
oh..i wanna be in love.. -etheridge

KaziaRose
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since 2001-08-18
Posts 14
Australia
2 posted 2001-08-18 12:52 PM


Dear Dara Beth
Such a beautiful story within this write...you mum must be a great fighter, we all are when we have something special to fight for and she had you....~HUGS~
~Kaz~

A mellifluous muse lies within this poet

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2001-08-18 01:04 AM


DaraBeth~
What a heartfelt, tender story~

Good for your mom !
Mom's are like that - aren't they ?
Bless you~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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