Open Poetry #15 |
Haiku |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Haiku Illusions flower Fragments the passage of time And forever blooms |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nice Seymour.... quite a lot said here with just the few words... I enjoyed |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a morning ~smile for you, Sy ~Wynter |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Sy....perfection greeting my eyes... thank you! |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Perenniel rose Fragrant petal shields from thorn A lifetime treasure |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow - well expressed! Haiku suits you well. More, please! Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Love's rose of suppose velveteen petals unfurl kissed by mornings's mist Blossoms of fragrance Scents waft thru Eden's garden Perfumed promises ~~~~~~~~~ only you could inspire me to write when I just woke up. *winkiewinkie* me Feels like Im dancin with truth and wisdom |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
ahh, very nice 'forever blooms' extremely nice |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
forever blooms indeed. . . well done Sir. . . well done. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Flower of the morn Blooms in verse of sweet adorn Penning fragrantly *Ya' just knows how ta' do it all, don't ya'~ You sweetheart, you ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cpat Hair, Thank you. Wynter, Thank you for the morning smile. Lady, Thank you for perfection. *L* Nan, And joy rides the wind With your perenniel rose Truely a treasure. Melissa, Thank you for the WOW, I'll try. JM, Beautiful awakening, love ya. VAS, Thank you for the very. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sven, Thank you my friend. Marge, I'm mugging you some kisses and hugs. *L* Sy |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Very beautiful Seymour! Maree |
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poetsguild Member
since 2001-08-12
Posts 85Florida |
Well said with subtle metaphors a lot of message in a small package |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Angel, Thank you Poetguild, Nice comment, thank you. |
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KaziaRose Junior Member
since 2001-08-18
Posts 14Australia |
Beautiful Haiku, enjoyed ~Kaz~ A mellifluous muse lies within this poet |
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