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Mr»ÄlleÿÇät Member
since 2001-06-02
Posts 190 |
A response to a writers challenge Stirrings Leaves of trees blanket my bed A silly old alleycat keeps watch at my head These things of nature a mothers fond child One chose their own course growing up wild Forgetting the fortune I've given to life Replacing with darkness pollution and strife I send them warnings they don't heed or care Destroying my children for the public welfare I stir and storms sweep in from the sea Frown and my wrinkles cause many to flee Heed my message I pray you will hear Dreams of destruction my waking draws near Soon I will strike no choice to be had One out of many their story most sad Create a companion my bounty bestow Instead bringing heartache man makes me his foe Author Mr»ÄlleÿÇät copyright © Ed Schmidt 2001 |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A good response to the challenge! Well met! |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Mr. AlleyCat, This is great, Im not sure what the challenge was but I love your work. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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Mr»ÄlleÿÇät Member
since 2001-06-02
Posts 190 |
Thank you for your kind comments  The challenge was a pic of a forest scene A woman was lying on the ground covered with leaves. You could only see her head and neck. A black cat was sitting looking at the viewer by the womans head. The womans face showed a slight flush on the cheaks. Though her face was smooth the look showed some underlying emotion, or stirrings At least to me lol Mr»ÄlleÿÇät |
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