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Eloise
Senior Member

since 1999-11-27

Posts 1096
Wyoming

0 posted 2001-08-17 10:17 PM

The dreams I dream may never be.
But they are just for me to see.
The stardust trails now come to light,
Come share with me this sapphire night.

Though absence of unspoken words,
The ringing of true love was heard.
Music drifting all around.
Hearts connecting without sound.

The gentle warmth of our embrace
Begins to bring two hearts to race.
Then a passion we did share
Through the dreams that took me there.

Tender words of lovers flow,
Whispered in the afterglow.
Don't wake me now, just let me sleep.
These fantasies are mine to keep.

darabeth
Junior Member

since 2001-02-17

Posts 33

1 posted 2001-08-17 10:45 PM

I think we all have unspoken words,and poetry lets us speak.Excellent poem,very nicely done!HUGS--

Dara Beth

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

2 posted 2001-08-18 12:12 PM

'Music drifting all around.
Hearts connecting without sound.

The gentle warmth of our embrace
Begins to bring two hearts to race.
Then a passion we did share
Through the dreams that took me there.'

This is a longingly beautiful piece, Eloise...great rhymes...I really enjoyed this...

sp

can I see my world without you in it?
baby, not for a single minute...

KaziaRose
Junior Member

since 2001-08-18

Posts 14
Australia

3 posted 2001-08-18 12:49 PM

Eloise~
Wonderful write, I really enjoyed this. Flowed beautifully

~Kaz~

A mellifluous muse lies within this poet

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2001-08-18 01:02 AM

Eloise~
My stars, this is just lovely~

'The stardust trails now come to light,
Come share with me this sapphire night'

I like the imagery here very much~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

cruz
Member

since 2000-07-18

Posts 282
Dallas,Texas USA

5 posted 2001-08-18 01:12 AM

fantasy is cool. you dont have to pay anything for it, or do you? very imaginative. nice write...

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

6 posted 2001-08-18 07:21 AM

Hi Eloise. This is just exactly my kind of poem. I'm glad I found it. I dream to live..and I dream of him whenever possible..
Love this.
Sandra

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

7 posted 2001-08-18 09:30 AM

This is beautifully written Eloise ... the cadence are rhyme flow so wonderfully, very much enjoyed this romantic piece.

Best wishes,
/Kit

Eloise
Senior Member

since 1999-11-27

Posts 1096
Wyoming

8 posted 2001-08-18 09:07 PM

To all who have read my post, I thank you very much. I do appreciate your comments. It's been a while since I've posted here, but as always this place is still like home and I always feel welcome. HUGS to all.

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