Open Poetry #15 |
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Nearer Be,Still,Unto My Soul |
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wpwpoet Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 99 |
Nearer be,still,unto my soul Refrain not thy love, return unto my soul Depart not again,alone thus nearer be,still Fade not with evens’ breeze as dusks array Return as dawn doth not delay Thus nearer be, still, unto my soul Withhold naught grievous pain neigh release to me that mayest taketh away Thus nearer be, still, unto my soul Allow our loves flowered day Sensuous aromas we navigate Within thy sight our lives bouquet Your butterflies alight Eden’s’ escape Nearer be, still, unto my soul Depart not again that I mayest crave honeyed savor upon thy lips delicate flavor Would that ,I pine, such sensual tone As angelic verse of love we spoke Return,thus depart not again,alone Thou sensed my being shudder and quake When times we entwined, within haven safe Refrain not thy love, thus return To nearer be , still, unto my soul … co.WPW031900 [This message has been edited by wpwpoet (edited 08-16-2001).] |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
interesting write... I like the turn of phrase in the ending verse... heck..I liked the whole thing... I enjoyed! |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
This has all of the quietude of a prayer...well done, poet.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Wpwpoet, Interesting enjoyed |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Soft and nice...James |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
A lovely truly wonderful write...... It has touched my soul in so many ways...and I just loved the use of old English. It gave it such a magical touch..... I would quote the whole poem to tell you just how much I enjoyed it..... Thank you ************************** "Oh...me!Oh Life! |
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ShannonM Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 104Drifitng |
Lovely expression. ShannonM |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
So much said here that is in my heart. What perfectly done emotional writing. Sandra I took a walk around the world to ease my troubled mind. I left my body lying somewhere in the sands of time (3 Doors Down) |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
unto thy soul shall I be with quiet song sung for thee until the night my song is heard and the heart of love becometh stirred well done. . . a wonderful prayerpoem. . . given in the style of Olde. . . -------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Nicely done I enjoyed. Throw your heart out in front of you |
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