Open Poetry #15 |
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The Horse Or Delusions Of Grandeur |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England ![]() |
The Horse Or Delusions Of Gradeur ![]() He was such a beautiful horse to look at And on such a back you’ve never ever sat His eyes were mysterious and so deep Full of dreams that he would ever keep Never would he forget he had his pride Only the best on him would he let ride He held his head high as he rode on by The mares looked on and heaved a sigh He’d call to them as he stood all alone. Come and race with me in the sea foam The mares would whinny and call back Oh yes guide us onto your special track He knew he was perfect in every way He was great what else would they say He dreamed of all the mares he’d win He would start soon he had to begin All he wanted was to have horsy play But slowly all the mares were led away All his careful plans and all his schemes Now lay in the dust as broken dreams Why would they all leave him alone there? When he was the one that would care There’s something that he didn’t know That his magnificence is only for show He bore a mark of a single white star Was fated to travel but not get very far In his head all his plots and tricky plans Would take him far into foreign lands In reality he won’t go anywhere at all He’ll be at his mistress’s beck and call He’s a gelding his plans are of no avail There’s nothing under his flowing tail No high flown ideas or his supple grace Will give him access to the special race There’ll be no Star to follow him on No foal to frolic in the pleasant sun No one to teach his ways of mystery No son to carry on his crowned beauty His going will disappoint the mares I fear Maybe they’ll shed at his passing a tear Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 08-17-2001).] |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Marsha, a tear for that poor baby!! And all his big plans... Good write, ME |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh girl it just gets better with every read LOL... |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
husbands everywhere can identify with this stirring piece... ![]() |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
bummer for him..never thought much about what the gelding thought about! good to see you miss bubbles ![]() hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetMarshaGirl~ When you pay a visit - YOU PAY A VISIT ! This is delightfully done, sweet poet~ I love ya' and I miss ya' and if it wasn't for e-mail I'd have to come and get ya' ! Now get in here more often ! We LOVE YOU~ ![]() *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Yes, yes, yes, good to see you and clever write, I enjoyed the rea.The last line confused me some, but then I'm falling asleep as we speak. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Excellent Marsha! What a wonderful read. I loved the perspective you wrote this from, and the message you've portrayed. Much enjoyed! ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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poetsguild Member
since 2001-08-12
Posts 85Florida |
gee, life sucks and then you get neutered. great read, Marsha |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
ok. . . when you make a point. . .you make a point. . . ![]() wonderfully done love. . . ----------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
And it happens all the time...James |
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