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Open Poetry #15

Soul Kiss - Senryu

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

0 posted 2001-08-17 12:30 PM

Soul Kiss

I shall breathe you in
savour your nectar of heart
and never exhale

By Melissa P. Monette

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Snooganzmeister32
Member

since 2001-07-17

Posts 67
Cali, USA

1 posted 2001-08-17 12:44 PM

I'm not sure what I liked about this, but it was really great.

inot2B
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since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

2 posted 2001-08-17 01:08 AM

Beautiful, your words compliment your picture very well.

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

3 posted 2001-08-17 01:19 AM

Oh wow...never exhale...now there is a statement. Glad you made it.

Chelsea~
Member

since 2001-02-09

Posts 260
Ontario, CANADA

4 posted 2001-08-17 09:06 AM

missy,
this is perfect!

Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

5 posted 2001-08-17 09:18 AM

Now you know I'm smiling, Melybee....

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

6 posted 2001-08-17 11:01 AM

sigh...beautiful...you inspire me..thanks...helen

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

7 posted 2001-08-17 11:04 AM

sounds inviting to me....

very nice... very nice indeed.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2001-08-17 01:05 PM

and you call me romantic. . .

*sigh*. . . love it Melissa. . . I just love it. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

9 posted 2001-08-17 01:22 PM

Melissa,
Now this really calls for a WOW.

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

10 posted 2001-08-18 02:05 PM

i second Seymour...you should really be proud of this senryu...

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

11 posted 2001-08-18 02:08 PM

Well done Melissa! I hope you can hold your breath forever. Lovely picture and a fine poem!

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