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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2001-08-17 02:45 AM


Weary now, I'm off to bed...
oh end this aching in my head
let these ceaseless thoughts desist
and my head a pillow kiss.

Let there be dreams that wait for me...
a certain change of destiny.
Surely it cannot be lies
but dreams that form behind my eyes

as every day a wish for hope
like praying on a horoscope...
How silly I appear to be
to think love found a grace in me.

I've had enough.
I give up.
Broken spirit wrapped in sheets.
And silly me, I keep the hope
I'll still find love somewhere in sleep.

© Copyright 2001 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2001-08-17 04:25 AM


Yep, silly me....just when I thought it was safe to creep off to bed, the daughter got sick, the toilet over flowed, the shut off valve was stuck, and no plunger either...and then I stepped in an enormous ant pile while hosing out the towels because there was also no mop...I WANNA GO HOME...
Cpat Hair
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2 posted 2001-08-17 08:36 AM


( smiling) Dang it.... life just happens...

hope thing are better today...and that you find the things you are looking for...


tracie66
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3 posted 2001-08-17 08:43 AM


Hiya Sen  
   sad, lonesome piece hon. All good things come to those who wait ~HUGS~
Tracie
Great write my friend


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


[This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 08-17-2001).]

Lady In White
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4 posted 2001-08-17 09:20 AM



You really stepped into it that time, hey?  Hugs....

Janet Marie
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5 posted 2001-08-17 10:02 AM


baby...you need a vacation ..
lets  go find us a port of call and some really cute and REAAALY young sailors  

(just trying to make you smile me twin)
love you
me

Feels like Im dancin with truth and wisdom
Precious rhythm you are my guide
These days are sacred, my heart is humble
Oh warrior show me thy light

VAS
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6 posted 2001-08-17 10:20 AM


well an ant pile might be a good deal better than some piles...if it's not red ants

I too hope your day is better today!

darabeth
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7 posted 2001-08-17 10:21 AM


I just can't help but to enjoy your work.Very good piece!(makes me   )

     Dara Beth

doreen peri
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8 posted 2001-08-17 10:42 AM


well, harpo, i must admit that praying on a horoscope is indeed a silly idea but dreaming about finding love ain't that silly, y'know? so dream girl dream...!!!
shadow of the fall
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9 posted 2001-08-17 11:41 AM


dream on!  I feel the same about, about finding love I mean, it has to be a dream sometimes!

Karen

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10 posted 2001-08-17 01:03 PM


shhhhhhhh. . . take another look. . .  

well done my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

JamesMichael
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11 posted 2001-08-17 04:32 PM


I understand the feelings and the title...hope sunshine smiles right into your face...James
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