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{{{ Tearful Rain }}} |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
~~~* Tearful Rain *~~~ It rained today But no one saw The drops of rain Coming so slow I didn’t know The sky That unleashed that rain I looked up But the vision Was so blurred with so much pain Clouds gathered In that sky Slowly Silently Crawling past all grounds Until they stopped there Ever silent as before Then suddenly growling With a terrible roar For moments I was lost Unable to see Whether it was the sea Or A simple sound Made within The walls of my misery It rained And I didn’t know Which sky gave such Tearful rain No one saw The rain dropping so slow No one saw but me As I looked Deep within And found the dark roaring clouds of rain Etched with so much pain I didn’t fight the rain But silently wished It would pour down Till nothing would remain ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Thank you --------------------------------------- |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh my, quite a powerful poem. Sadness filling it. Smile, it will be ok.. You must reads Sven's poem about rain if you haven't yet. You will enjoy. Sandra I took a walk around the world to ease my troubled mind. I left my body lying somewhere in the sands of time (3 Doors Down) |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
She beat me too it was going to suggest you read Sven's poem too, oh dear, if this is how you feel - I hope you cheer up but it is probably just a great poem, well done! If you have but one true friend when you die you were truly blessed |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Such strong yet sad emotions were portrayed here, well written. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
This is a powerful melancholy piece, the rain always reminds me of my Grandma's legacy and passing, as did this poem in a bittersweet way. Well expressed!  Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Clouds gathered In that sky Slowly Silently Crawling past all grounds Until they stopped there Ever silent as before Then suddenly growling With a terrible roar love the image this gives me... very nicely done. as for the pain.... I can only hope for you relief and peace...wishing you the best |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
~Sandra~ I'm smiling.... ......wishing that it would be ok soon.......I've read Sven's poem....and I don't want to go there and read it again lest it would resound those echoes of tearful rain..... Thank you dearest friend ******************************* ~Sharon~ It was how I felt at the time of writing that poem........I hope I no longer do..... Thank you dearly...... ******************************** ~Sue~ Thank you for the kind words..... ******************************* ~Melissa~ I'm sorry if I reminded you of rather painful memories....... I always thought that the rain brings so much joy.......but I guess I was gravely mistaken as it sometimes seems to evoke such a sad atmosphere...... Thank you for your wonderful words..... ***************************** ~Ron~ And I love it that you loved it...... Thank you sooooooo much for your kind sweet words.....dear friend....  ********************************** [This message has been edited by MyEnchanted_Melody (edited 08-17-2001).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
my friend, it would seem that perhaps we saw the same rain. . . *sigh*. . . but, today is another day. . . and the rain it gone. . . well done, but sad. . . perhaps the sun will bring smiles today. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Hi..~Sven~ Oh....yes, ....perhaps we saw the same rain. But it wasn't raining outside when I wrote that.....perhaps inside...  And today, it rained .......a stormy loudy rain......as if it came an answer to my words.....only I didn't ask for such a scary rain....perhaps that was another kind of tearful rain. Oh....I'm speaking alot..... Thank you my dear friend as always......I'd love to hear from you sometime..... *************************** |
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