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moongoddess
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since 2001-08-14
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0 posted 2001-08-17 08:12 AM



all he does is push me away
tells her this is a love thing

can't wait to get me home
tells me, after he uses up everything
i have left to give, of guilty feelings.
you are so delicious he says
let's just be friends
i have guilty feelings
let's just be friends
after we go down, he sits at the edge
of something he wanted so badly
and wonders why he has feelings for me
this is why he pushes me so far
it's the fear of falling
while geminis might make excuses of
being split in two i can only
think of one excuse,
that i love being with you.

© Copyright 2001 Mellissa - All Rights Reserved
Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2001-08-17 08:51 AM


an insighful and personal read...nicely presented..with its questions and it truths..

I enjoyed

snowpants
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since 2000-09-16
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2 posted 2001-08-17 04:00 PM


This is really good, moongoddess...great flow...I enjoyed it...

sp  

can I see my world without you in it?
baby, not for a single minute...

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