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the story of you
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the story of you |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
A captive audience by her own design asked the story of you tonight I wove us the fantasy we’d thought to be a given She fell asleep tonight my words a soft lullaby I remembering how I loved talking you to sleep |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Duncan~ Soft ... tender ... longingly portrayed~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Snooganzmeister32 Member
since 2001-07-17
Posts 67Cali, USA |
This really said something to me. When I find out what, I'll let you know. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
this is very nice...helen |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Beautiful and tender words here. Thanks Duncan. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
A very tender write, a lovely read...Duncan, you have a very quiet gift...keep sharing, please... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nice... tender, soft, and gentle... a pleasure to read..and a pleasure to picture in my mind... I enjoyed a great deal |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Shhh...it's early, and I don't want to wake anyone up... just want to read lovely expressions... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I still love this one, Dunc. Nice bedtime reading material. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
precious |
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