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Duncan
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0 posted 2001-08-17 12:57 PM




A captive audience by her own design
asked the story of you tonight

I wove us the fantasy
we’d thought to be
a given

She fell asleep tonight
my words a soft lullaby

I remembering
how I loved talking you to sleep


© Copyright 2001 Duncan - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-08-17 02:01 AM


Duncan~
Soft ... tender ... longingly portrayed~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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2 posted 2001-08-17 02:29 AM


This really said something to me. When I find out what, I'll let you know.
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3 posted 2001-08-17 02:43 AM


this is very nice...helen
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4 posted 2001-08-17 05:54 AM


Beautiful and tender words here. Thanks Duncan.
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5 posted 2001-08-17 08:40 AM



A very tender write, a lovely read...Duncan, you have a very quiet gift...keep sharing, please...

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6 posted 2001-08-17 08:48 AM


very nice... tender, soft, and gentle...

a pleasure to read..and a pleasure to picture in my mind...

I enjoyed a great deal

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7 posted 2003-01-18 07:21 AM


Shhh...it's early, and I don't want to wake anyone up...

just want to read
lovely expressions...

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8 posted 2003-02-23 01:10 PM


I still love this one, Dunc.
Nice bedtime reading material.

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9 posted 2003-03-06 07:55 AM


Enjoyed...James
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precious
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