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Crystal Clear Tears - A Gift For Serenity
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Crystal Clear Tears - A Gift For Serenity |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada 
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 ~* Crystal Clear Tears *~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mysteria~ This is chillingly lovely~ Goosie bumps here. Lovely piece of writing. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Beautiful |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Mysteria- Oh wow! This is so sadly beautiful. This touched me very deeply, and I must echo Marge...goosebumps here too. Wonderful write!  Love and hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ladies, Thank you. I wrote this for Serenity as her favorite of mine is Crystal Tears of Jade, so I tried to do a spin off that one for her. Again, thank you? ~ Give the heavens above more than just a passing glance ~And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance ~ I hope you dance. (Lee Ann Womack) [This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 07-24-2001).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I feel so naked. You have peered into my soul and written me. Thank you sharon, you're a comfort and a joy to me. More later. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
A butterfly, but in a cocoon she’d hide. ========================== Ive seen her spread her wings...and its a beautiful sight ... a lovely gesture and kind intend Sharon. very well done gentle poetess jm only you could give love that satisfies the soul... |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
beautiful!!!! wish that I had more words to describe this beautiful sad poem. Had read it several time before I reply. Excellent work. Charisma |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Most beautiful poem Mysteria, sad... Do not fear going forward slowly, |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Mysteria, it is so kind of you to read into a poet's work so intently that you softly cradle the souls.... well done m'dear.... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Thank you all for your kind words and hugs for Karen. Serenity, once your wings are unfolded you will fly with that beautiful soul of yours, and I do send my love to you. ~ Give the heavens above more than just a passing glance ~And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance ~ I hope you dance. (Lee Ann Womack) [This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 07-25-2001).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Love to you, sharon. I thank you a million times. You are a lovely person with a beautiful spirit. Hugs again. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Serenity, that poem is the opposite of my one wish for you, and I know it will come true, and a beautiful butterfly will soar in a cellophane sea of happiness soon! Hugs again, sweet one. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
You are a beautiful person and this truly touched my heart more than you could ever know. " I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"How sad, she lives alone inside that shell, That place she knows and guards so well." Ah Sharon ... you've captured the essence of the emptiness one finds in a tortured soul beautifully in this piece. A hauntingly emotive piece, very nicely done my friend. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
She’ll go on forever, locked in pain, A fractured heart never to smile again. She’s lost all hope, and sits there crying, Down deep inside, her soul’s slowly dying. ==================== I certainly hope this is only a picture and not a prognostication. She is much too valuable not to find hapiness again. Insightful write indeed ... and, well done. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
What's there to add if all words are already spoken....you're such a sweet lady  Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Kathleen ~ Thank you for your kind heart as well. Kit ~ It usually takes one to know one, and pain is universal, thanks so much for taking the time to read this. Interloper ~ She will fly as a butterfly again soon, just like a crysallis takes time for a butterfly to emerge, she needs that time at her own speed, but knows we all love her that is for sure! I did not write this about her, but for her! Titia ~ You're pretty darn sweet yourself, did you know that? |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
 You are the gift--not just to me, but to everyone your wide reaching heart can touch. I love you, lady. I WILL come to visit you one day. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh how gorgeously sad and special |
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