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Open Poetry #15

For you to love me

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-08-15 09:26 PM

I just wanted so bad
for you to love me
the more I tried
the more I failed
I consumed in my efforts
the more I pleased you
the more you demanded
And eventually I stopped trying
the less I tried
the less I loved
Having nothing to hold on to
I gave up on your love.

Mother_Earth
Senior Member

since 2000-11-20

Posts 1370
1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan

1 posted 2001-08-15 10:45 PM

walker, love is sometimes hard to find and then once found can be hard to keep. Probably nothing you or they did, it just wasn't ment to be. Sorry, ME

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

2 posted 2001-08-16 12:09 PM

My heart is thinking of yours, because it understands where you are writing from.

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

3 posted 2001-08-16 12:47 PM

Boy do I understand this!

Well put!

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

4 posted 2001-08-17 10:33 PM

Hi Walker,

Yes this is very well written and happens often,

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

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