Open Poetry #15 |
Weeping Willow Sunshine |
Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
I love to see the smile on her face that shines in her eyes Hear the laughter and music in her voice as she exudes happiness The feeling that all is well in her life that strife away from her flies Such beauty from the inside out that leaves a glow to her flesh Then the othe side is shown a smile under sad sad eyes No laughter no happiness only a smile and the music all gone And she fights to keep from smothering as from her heart she dies The summer is almost over her babies care to others begins a death song Oh how I wish to take this look of pain from her so white face By some magic give what every parent would gladly pass on She is doing her best to face the cold winter days with grace No one can take this load from her slim shoulders after all is said and done |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
lets pray for a warm winter of compromise... perhaps fall will bring some healing change of season touching poem of a mothers heart ME hugs to all involved. take care jm Feels like Im dancin with truth and wisdom |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Don't you know that you have touched the heart of me and of my many friends with this lovely verse... ah ME...what you do! This is wonderful! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nicely done and said.. touching indeed |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mother_Earth, A touching write. |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Thank you all. She is so brave and I am not helping by falling to pieces. Sorry ,my kid. It is dark and raining today, maybe that is my problem. Any way, thanks for your replies ME |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Summer's end used to only mean the end to staying up late, watching fire flies dance at night and a beginning of homework and class parties...now it means so much more...Thank you mom...I love you and I know it hurts for you too~ |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
M.E~ such a sad piece, every word was felt ~HUGS~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Butterflies, my kid, and this too will pass. Maybe some day we will think these were the good old days. Another prayer..... Tracie, Too many others have "been there". Oh, how I wish it wasn't so. |
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