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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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Sometimes Sometimes you dive in and the water seems warm, than comes the reality that chills can magnify upon the surface prematurely being quite costly. A ripple of words making wakes amongst the calm and calculating minds that seethe to view differently. A vision like a tornadic whisper gone array in magnitude, floating away any realm of truthful understanding. In the measure of depth one can only presume, what words have to offer as they float unconsciously towards their intended destination without warning. Sometimes only fragments can penetrate surfaces. Sometimes lightening is mild in comparison. Sometimes a giggle finds a detour and is lost. Sometimes a wish is only a one-sided illusion. Sometimes words just become shallow and worthless. Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
A vision like a tornadic whisper gone array in magnitude, floating away any realm of truthful understanding. In the measure of depth one can only presume, what words have to offer as they float unconsciously towards their intended destination without warning. such truths here... a nice write and one I certainly enjoyed |
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citizenx Member
since 2001-07-31
Posts 189motorcade |
A vision like a tornadic whisper gone array in magnitude, floating away any realm of truthful understanding. In the measure of depth one can only presume, what words have to offer as they float unconsciously towards their intended destination without warning. wonderful musings shadows flicker sweet end tame |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
The gentle men have spoken for me.... |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
fine writing here, dreamer... nice to see you again!! hope all is well some great lines in here, miss poet |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very well expressed, Gloria. Yes, sometimes, so true. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Gloria - It's great to see you - and I really like this piece - Sometimes indeed - I like the line about the fragment penetrating the whole best of all. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Cpat Hair: Glad you enjoyed, thanks very much.  Citizenx: Thank You Lady in White:Glad you enjoyed also, thanks for reading. Doreen Peri: Thank You, it's nice to be seen on my end also I am fine and dandy, thanks. Glad you liked the poem. Denise: Thank You very much Nan: Thank You. I enjoyed writing this poem. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sometimes you fall in love all by yourself...James |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
wow this is good writing! Everyone already quoted my fav lines hope to see more from you soon |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes...sometimes |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sigh so true so sad |
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