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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Do you know the feeling of seeing a face that makes your entire being ache with the memory of love? They hold parades for lesser moments. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
......yes........and sadly, yes they do..... wow, you said so much with so few words. I am keeping this one.  |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
of course it helps if I hit the library button...... LOL |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
as someone who loves to use as few words as possible, I have to say, I love this!! snow "Trace my body with your words |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
This is lovely. To see real beauty ~ being blindfolded helps! ~* Mysteria *~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Succinct and sincere... that last line's impact is poetry in motion. well done poet Duncan Welcome to Poetry Land So nice to have you here with us. jm I know no one is to blame |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Awesome! I must echo what has already been said. You have emcompassed a large deal of emotion with just these couple lines. Love that last line! Great first post and I look forward to more in the future! ~Krista  "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Duncan, an awesome first write and I might add, this type of poetry will be looked forward to with delight! Welcome to Passions! Check your e-mail for a special message! Karilea |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Indeed...  |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Welcome! I love short poems and this is a winner. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Fantastic use of simplicity. Yet your words have measurless meaning! WELCOME! Sincerely, Regina |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
yes. . . yes. . . they do. . . and yes. . . yes. . . yes I do know this feeling. . . well done. . . welcome!!! Hope to see more from you. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
I have been away far too long, this is a wonderful piece to come back to. Welcome Duncan.... May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat... |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Oh yes, I know this feeling well. Great expression here, Duncan. Welcome to Passions! All writing comes |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Emotion, it encourages a major movement. "Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve" |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Well said... *smiles* ~Tier |
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Snooganzmeister32 Member
since 2001-07-17
Posts 67Cali, USA |
Like everyone else.. welcome, I love your poem, etc. Everyone stole what I was going to say. I hope you have fun with us XD |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
yes, I certainly do. Welcome to Passions. " I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes, I know the feeling very nice, short but sweet |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Took some looking but I found it... and I am keeping it. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Me too!  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sigh...glad I stumbled across this again |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
You know Dixie~ This was Duncan's first post and still my favorite. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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