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moongoddess
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 4
PA, USA

0 posted 2001-08-14 09:40 PM

an abyss you have made my heart
the demon of you imprisoned in me
prepare my body for burial, with this
sweet smelling resin called myrhh,
for i can not live with just the
demon of you inside of me
call it greed, call it passion,
perhaps love,
but it is all or nothing
i will not live on with just the serpent
of your evil lingering
you left me for i would not be your disciple
i learn from no one but that of myself
and now, i look for everything you were
before your inner became outer, in every
other human carcass similar to yours
but the sweetness you showed and the
beauty you shall always withold
can never be duplicated,
neither can your love
so now i reach on through days and nights
to find that i am seen as
nothing but an alabaster vase,
a light creamy color, a soft stone,
that everyman wishes to put something in,
or brea
while i should be seen as a piece of art
i am looked at as an object
so it's just another day
looking for a duplicate
of your love & carcass

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2001-08-14 09:53 PM

Loved the imagery here---a beautiful entrance moongoddess...but how could a moongoddess not make a beautiful entrance?
Welcome to passions--loved your references in this piece!

shadow of the fall
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since 2001-08-13

Posts 83
Indiana

2 posted 2001-08-14 10:17 PM

Welcome, and this is a glorious verse.

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

3 posted 2001-08-15 09:17 AM

Welcome to Passions! Please check your e-mail for a special greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2001-08-15 09:28 AM

Welcome... very nice entrance I would say... nice imagery and form.. I am looking forward to reading more of your words..

WRBreezin
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since 2001-08-04

Posts 212

5 posted 2001-08-15 09:48 AM

Intriguing, involving, and rewarding, but three thoughts coming to mind as I read.

Willie

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
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6 posted 2001-08-15 07:11 PM

I'll admit it. . . the title got me. . .and I was not disappointed. . .

well done. . . very flowing and full of images. . . welcome!!!

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RSWells
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since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

7 posted 2001-08-15 08:12 PM

Difficult to despense to the past that which was both good and evil, hard to dismiss as all one or all the other. Thought provoking.

"Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve"

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