Open Poetry #15 |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California ![]() |
Is Can I tell you again oh heart of wishes oh dream that dreams big dreams oh youth can I tell you that this fragrant day will pass and that the moon is Can this bursting that hurls you against the sky listen to a quiet moment and hear the compassion that clings to the fabric of time listen to the pain sizzle and dry on the hot cement hear the laughter through the tunnel through the black hole that melds time and distance and fills up with the color of lasting It seems this suitcase has been emptied so many times cleaned out and put away washed and folded where is the wrinkle that attaches with that comfortable unwash the human smell of knowing So we feel the sharpness and sand it down take the nub and straighten it place fabric on the perfect striations and cover the spirit make the child draw between the lines Can I tell you again that the spirit that is rough rock and raging river that folds its energy into creation that changes one small grain of sand over years into a jewel IS ________ this is a repost |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This IS a repost of the best kind...because it needed to be... hugs.... |
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howpeculiar Member
since 2000-12-12
Posts 56 |
Martie, you have given me a smile and a quiet that was so needed today. *sigh* Because I am feeling like the sharpness sanded down, and because THIS ~ Can I tell you again that the spirit that is rough rock and raging river that folds its energy into creation that changes one small grain of sand over years into a jewel IS ~ Speaks to me today as though you KNEW I was needing it... Well, thank you. Thank you for creating and sharing (again). You hold such a talent for words and for sight. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautifully done and full of wisdom! |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy ![]() |
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Soaringeagle Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 156CANADA |
THANKS MARTIE FOR BRIGHTENING A DULL DREARY DAY SHALOM |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Can I tell you again that the spirit that is rough rock and raging river that folds its energy into creation that changes one small grain of sand over years into a jewel IS you my dear lady..may tell me any time of rivers and stone..or of your life..and feelings..for your poetry is |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, They say what is, is, but your is, is special. Enjoyed |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
An echo to Capt. Hair. Lovely. Bob |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Keep reposting, Martie They are wonderful! Liz |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Rough reality can be a thing of beauty, untamed imperfection holds a majestic magnetism for an eye which perceives truth as something out of the comfort of norm. Enjoyed. "Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve" |
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illusion Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 296 |
Yes, please. The telling is needed. ![]() ![]() |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now this was beautiful and it IS a new one to me! Enjoyed it Martie. If you have but one true friend when you die you were truly blessed |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ You have just given credence to the saying - 'What was, IS ... and will be again.' This IS beautiful ... and IS a keeper~ ![]() I adore the ink in your heart~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Martie- This IS just wonderful! ![]() I absolutely love it! Hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Just as "is" is , so shall you forever be and "are" the best among the best. Beautiful write as always and much much much appreciated by this cowboy. |
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