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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
 ~~~* Lady violet *~~~ Violet….. is my name….. a dream land of fame a loveliness that can never be more lovely than your looks at me A flower I might be That wither And die away But a being of majesty I could be With so many hidden Words to say Purple …. Is my color Vanity Is my call Dare to hurt me And you will lose it all ~~*~~*~~*~~ *An old poem as my muse seems to be in vacation… ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Thank you "Oh...me!Oh Life! |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Bring the old ones on, they fit the day quite well... |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Well I'm not any good at critiques and such... I'm just here for poetry. So I'm sorry that I don't have any constructive opinions for you. To put it simply... I really enjoyed your poem. I'm glad you shared this (even if it's old) because it was very lovely. Be kind, be true, be bold, be you. Freedom comes when you learn to live unafraid. [This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (edited 08-14-2001).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
honeysuckle is my vine clinging sweet with smell divine colors vary and in many hues on warmer summer nights I leave my clues tendrilled tight around this heart I cling to hope and a day's new start (chuckling) Sometime I read poems and onother just pops into my head.... hope you don't mind... I truly enjoyed yours...and the image as well If your muse is on vacation..indeed share the older ones. I am sure many or most I have not seen....and I always enjoy reading your words... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MyEnchantedMelody~ Violets are among my favorite flowers to cultivate with pen~ Thank you for sharing your bouquet~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
a lovely bouquet from your poetry garden... yes...share the seeds of your pen. very well done Melody. We're all feeding our lonely...like it might go away... |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
~Lady in white~ Thank you for recieving an old one.....  -------------------------- ~Dark Enchantress~ Be sure that you have done me alot telling me that you enjoyed it..... I believe in the simple powers of poetry to give joy ....and that in its own way is helpful. So thank you alot for reading and for your comment.....  I like your name, by the way....quite charming. ---------------------- ~Ron~ I love it when a poem pops as a result of reading mine......So just take your full freedom on this regard and be sure I'd never mind it..... Thank you dearly for the encouragement...and I will.....  --------------------------- ~Marge~ I guess it is all too clear that I find violets very special and unique.....telling so much..... Thank you for enjoying my bouquet ..  -------------------------- ~Janet~ It warms my heart that you enjoy "the seeds of my pen".... Thank you indeed.... ------------------------ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Lovely poem, and I love the ending. Good write, keep sharing the old ones, I will read them all. Sandra |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
indeed, one that relates the fragility of us. . . we're not as tough as we might think sometimes. . . and sometimes, we're tougher. . . well done my friend. . . and there's nothing wrong with bringing out the older ones. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
~Dear Sandra~ Thank you dearest.....and if my muse didn't get back soon, I guess I won't have much choice..... --------------------- ~Sven~ You have a very lovely and profound way of seeing through the lines and the simple uttrances.....and I always love it... I thought you'd start coughing because of my dusty poem....lol Thank you dear friend..... ******************************** "Oh...me!Oh Life! |
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